Here are several designs for the MUDWATER 2011 Triathlon/Duathlon
Revisions Requested:
One Response to MUDWATER 2011 Triathlon Shirt Designs
Alan: I think the first one if too similar to the old design, but without the “lake”. It’s a nice clean design, but only text.
The second one obviously places emphasis on the run, which isn’t bad, but I would delete the”get dirty” tag line and put less emphasis on the MUD Water by shrinking the font size and increasing the triathlon and duathon font. I think we can eliminate the club logo and put out on the back of the shirt.
Maude likes the third one, but not the colors. I have the same comments as the second one in regard to font sizes, tag line and and logo.
Heather: I agree with Alan’s comments. First one too simple and similar to what we had…the second one is a little too busy and I have the same thoughts about emphasizing the mud that Alan did. It’s not as if it’s a Muddy Buddy race… I like the third one the best graphically but don’t like the colors as well as the red and blue. I think if we can stick with club colors that would be nice.
Chrissy: I agree with Alan. The second one could also have a “cleaner” shoeprint. The third one just looks too muddy.
Luther: I like the third one based on the originality of the design. I, personally, am not opposed to the colors–again, just to mix it up. I also like the “get dirty” tag line. If you are going to have a race called “Mudwater,” you’ve got to own and embrace the whole mud thing…right?
Chris: I agree with Luther. I think the 3rd one is the best and I would not change it. If the colors need to be adjusted that is fine with me.
Based on the conversation above, the following are my suggestions:
“Shoeprint” Design:
* Two-Color – Red & Blue
* Decrease “MUD WATER’ font size. Make equal and combine to one word. Keep color separation between “MUD” & “WATER” so red “WATER” is effectively in the blue shoe print, but with some white space around it..
* Increase “Triathlon & Duathlon” font size
* Decrease the “7.10.11″ and “Lake Afton” font sizes. Make equal.
* Delete the club logo, allowing font size changes to take up left side of shoe.
* Delete “Get Dirty” tag line
“Splat” Design:
* Decrease “MUD” and “WATER’ font sizes.
* The above would likely decrease the vertical “2011″ font size
* Increase “Triathlon & Duathlon” font size
* Decrease “7.10.11″ font size
* Delete “Get Dirty” tag line
* Show a two-color option using the club colors. (The splat would be red; the text blue or white like currently set, but with the darker blue.)
Alan: I think the first one if too similar to the old design, but without the “lake”. It’s a nice clean design, but only text.
The second one obviously places emphasis on the run, which isn’t bad, but I would delete the”get dirty” tag line and put less emphasis on the MUD Water by shrinking the font size and increasing the triathlon and duathon font. I think we can eliminate the club logo and put out on the back of the shirt.
Maude likes the third one, but not the colors. I have the same comments as the second one in regard to font sizes, tag line and and logo.
Heather: I agree with Alan’s comments. First one too simple and similar to what we had…the second one is a little too busy and I have the same thoughts about emphasizing the mud that Alan did. It’s not as if it’s a Muddy Buddy race… I like the third one the best graphically but don’t like the colors as well as the red and blue. I think if we can stick with club colors that would be nice.
Chrissy: I agree with Alan. The second one could also have a “cleaner” shoeprint. The third one just looks too muddy.
Luther: I like the third one based on the originality of the design. I, personally, am not opposed to the colors–again, just to mix it up. I also like the “get dirty” tag line. If you are going to have a race called “Mudwater,” you’ve got to own and embrace the whole mud thing…right?
Chris: I agree with Luther. I think the 3rd one is the best and I would not change it. If the colors need to be adjusted that is fine with me.
Matt: #3 for me! (http://www.MorrowFit.com)
Based on the conversation above, the following are my suggestions:
“Shoeprint” Design:
* Two-Color – Red & Blue
* Decrease “MUD WATER’ font size. Make equal and combine to one word. Keep color separation between “MUD” & “WATER” so red “WATER” is effectively in the blue shoe print, but with some white space around it..
* Increase “Triathlon & Duathlon” font size
* Decrease the “7.10.11″ and “Lake Afton” font sizes. Make equal.
* Delete the club logo, allowing font size changes to take up left side of shoe.
* Delete “Get Dirty” tag line
“Splat” Design:
* Decrease “MUD” and “WATER’ font sizes.
* The above would likely decrease the vertical “2011″ font size
* Increase “Triathlon & Duathlon” font size
* Decrease “7.10.11″ font size
* Delete “Get Dirty” tag line
* Show a two-color option using the club colors. (The splat would be red; the text blue or white like currently set, but with the darker blue.)