Love seeing how the biz card process worked and how the whole thing evolved. If it’s the Jaki I’m thinking of, I really like her “normal” style for her art work, but this is definitely something different — and it’s really interesting to see how you worked with her to get what you really wanted.

Only 2 things I’d note really quickly. On the front of the card, the word “sells” is hard to read because the “e” is so small that it’s hard to distinguish. And the two l’s of “sell” look almost like one letter because they’re so close together. Maybe it’s not exactly that way on the actual card itself but I think I’d make it a bit easier to read so that it doesn’t look like maybe “sells” is her middle name and her last name is “Kansas.” And, hey, it could be something like that — she could a the KS real estate version of Indiana Jones.

The other thing would be her last name, because of the signature “writing” font. Is her last name “Gorp”? Because that’s the best answer I can come up with. But if I can’t find the card — which happens quite a bit for me, ’cause really I’m not hanging on to real estate people’s cards all that long — and I decide I want later to call this person again … it’d be handy to remember her last name … if I could have read it on her card instead of just guessing at it.

Looks like it could be something really weird like Cporp, which for all I know could be Eastern European. Or maybe Crorp. Which I couldn’t figure out how to pronounce, but that might not stop me from looking it up.

I’m guessing van Gorp. But since it’s not printed anywhere on the card, only “signed” it’s kinda hard to tell what her last name is.

Cass– looks like a typo above. Shouldn’t it be Kortney?

I love the header in #1 – very well designed. I can also see the benefits of the manufacturers scroll in #2 (provided they didn’t move too fast and were click-able)

Of course the alternative to the scroll, would be in the drop down under “Our Products”. You could have a separate menu under that by type of gun or by manufacturer.